How very poignant, my friend. A painful imagery in the last line- I exit the cave of resurrection. How heartfelt! As always, a succinct poem with vivid emotions and lively imagery.
This is like a whole novel in a poem. You told a story , Carter , a story that hit my senses as I read. Very profound , deep and thought provoking. Your emotions are portrayed with such intensity that the reader feels the angst and the sensitivity of the poet.
You have fathomed words quite deep. How I wish I was the proud poet of this piece!
I quite enjoy reading your pieces of poetry, I will keep coming back for more!
How very poignant, my friend. A painful imagery in the last line- I exit the cave of resurrection. How heartfelt! As always, a succinct poem with vivid emotions and lively imagery.
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Thank you for the profound comment, Sam. šš¤
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The pleasure is all mine šš
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This is like a whole novel in a poem. You told a story , Carter , a story that hit my senses as I read. Very profound , deep and thought provoking. Your emotions are portrayed with such intensity that the reader feels the angst and the sensitivity of the poet.
A very awesome post.
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Yas, thank you so much for taking the time to read and give a kind and heartfelt comment. I’m glad you connected with the poem. Appreciate it. š¤
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My pleasure.. I am happy you write and post here, gives me the opportunity to read your fabulous poetry.
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This is the best I’ve read today dear Carter. š¤š¤ You make me feel the emotions right through your words. Beautiful and the best ššš
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I’m greatly humbled by your kind words. Thank you so much. š¤š¤
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You are welcome dear Carter š¤š¤
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The fact that your mind produces such wonderful pieces amazes me…amazing postš
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I’m deeply humbled by your kind comment. Thank you so much. šš¤
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You have fathomed words quite deep. How I wish I was the proud poet of this piece!
I quite enjoy reading your pieces of poetry, I will keep coming back for more!
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Thank you so much for the kind words, I’m truly humbled. I read a few of your pieces and I must say, you’re gifted yourself.
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