13 replies to “Black Sands

  1. How very poignant, my friend. A painful imagery in the last line- I exit the cave of resurrection. How heartfelt! As always, a succinct poem with vivid emotions and lively imagery.

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  2. This is like a whole novel in a poem. You told a story , Carter , a story that hit my senses as I read. Very profound , deep and thought provoking. Your emotions are portrayed with such intensity that the reader feels the angst and the sensitivity of the poet.

    A very awesome post.

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