Downswing

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yassy says:

Apr 24, 2021 at 07:31

Rollercoaster of emotions. Great poetry , Carter.

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1. Carter Ford says:
  
  Apr 24, 2021 at 07:37
  
  Thank you, Yas.
  
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  1. yassy says:
    
    Apr 24, 2021 at 07:43
    
    My pleasure, Carter.
    
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T.J.S. Sherman says:

Apr 25, 2021 at 22:12

Very nice use of metaphor in this poem.

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1. Carter Ford says:
  
  Apr 26, 2021 at 13:49
  
  Thank you so much.
  
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samsahana says:

Jun 23, 2021 at 04:48

Every word of this is precious 🥺🤍 “Pervades my fantasies.”
So intense… Loved the very melancholy tone. This is intensely touching.

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1. Carter Ford says:
  
  Jun 24, 2021 at 21:32
  
  Thank you so much. 🙏🖤
  
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